Voted For: ~*Legend*~

Heroic Verse:
ok man well this was a dumb verse you had you had like some mab steched lines and a really bad stucture to it with weak punchlines and also weak vocabulary and a mad savage no flow to your verse...try using some witty metaphores to your lines with funny comics to it but try not to use porn flicks or any gay shit saying the guys gay or something cuz thats wack...but you had a nice nothing to your verse...sry kid elevation is the key..No Hate

Legend:
not bad man well sense this is one of your first battles on rv this wasent to bad you didnt reallly use any witty punches but you had a good damn flow to it with a weird thing to your lines lol i do not know what it is but its pretty kool...a real nice stucture with soem dope witty metaphoes in there...

Vote: Legend

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