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Old 12-15-04, 09:06 PM   #12
Parallel
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Voted For: Pastor Choi

Lil Cali aka Thuglife:
ok that was so weak dont even bother putting links in your verse because thats wack...but no hate you need to elevate battling vets your bound to be merked...you need work on punches and wordplay even know there like the same thign but so...just work on them stucture vocab metaphores and punches and you'll do fine in the future...lmao

Pastor Choi:
not bad from a newbie hehe...jk...but still your punches were tight good use of the witty metaphores mixed into your worplay..the use of good flow was good and you had a real good stucture to also clai had a good flow forgot to say that...but yea i feel Pastor choi took this without trying...No Hate...

Vote: Pastor Choi

return the favour in my battle verse 50cent_meurderinc.
iight thanks
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