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Old 12-16-04, 12:00 AM   #6
Parallel
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OlDirtyMexican:
well you have a bad stucture but a good flow with weak punchlines that dont mix with any wordplay..use witty metaphores and you might so some damage also mix soem punchlines in there becuz you didnt have anything to be honest...a beaver could eat you...jk

Exponent:
hmm for a newbies it not to great your stucture was mad off...and your vocab was pretty good i cant say vocab was weak..but you also need to work on punchlines...iight then you might do something...but you won this fo sho easly...just leaving soem good feed for yall

return as explained vote in my battle verse socrates or epic links are in the sig...peace
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