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Old 12-16-04, 10:46 AM   #3
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This was also one of the more elevated drops in the om section.
Both of your flows, are on point and make it a good read.
Structure is there, making it an easier read.
I did appreciate the metas, and the comparisons made by Trauma in this piece, I could see where you are coming from.
Conclusion, definetly has some good vocabulary coming through in here, making this a more "elite" read, meaning that quite obviously all the e-gangsters won't be able to read this.
Trauma definetly had an interesting point of view in this subject..

"Can I judge this? Women blessing your afterlife, incentive enough for some.
If it was drilled into me from birth, reason in life to die, I’d pick up a gun."

^Interesting statement.

Conclusion:

"Body's Strewn In Various Position's, Image's Of Past Superstition's.
Fulfilling Nostradamase's Acient, Intermission Accompanied By His Vision."

Brilliant line, entwining the prophet, or seer, Nostradamus.

Great drop.
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