^anywayz, going to feedback... this content was very good........
Only to awake to tears and a cramping stomach for food
Wish I could take fears and watch them plummit from the moon.
That nite when the blackbird lured my heart towards suicide.
No sight, only a burning hurt that turned into the quotes I write.
^vocab nice, imagery was there.... those were the best lines.....
p.s. you don't have to explain yourself to people, you've been doing that for a while now...
Good Luck with this and drop some more poetry, so i can read it, aight stay up..
pz

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