nope.

a bunch of words thrown together that mean nuttin.
your style is quite boring....

u get all excited....which is good....but your focus is to much on speed....
U have no feeling for the beat...
No signiture flow. (what I mean by this is....u can take the words an it would flow with any beat)
Not eye catchin...or ear catchin for that matter....

Phenom would and will do better.
You have alot to learn before you step to people.