Voted For: *Troop*
lol i got to give this battle to troop.... brilliant structure and flow here.... but i think you take it with your humur
"M"en "A"bove "B"itches sent Henchmen with 2 Thongs 2 Stripz
Your an Emcee with Lisp tryed Scriptures only Delivered Skriptz
This ya Toughest Fight Since Transvestites @ Virgina-Beach
^^^lol!!
so some good and funny lines there by troop
scrips... wasnt a bad verse.... i think you need to work on your flow and structure.... more personals i think and your punches just dont come hard enough
So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures
...... lol...... but your lines are a bit stretched so that sort of kills the flow...
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