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Old 12-17-04, 06:36 AM   #18
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This was quite a good battle ain't seen one in a while but i do think i know who got this...

Skriptz your verse was hella stretched but it flowed well enough...but work on that...punches were good the ice up the hill woulda been better flipped but it was aight some good personals but didn't feel this as a punch though

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Wasn't hard (no pun) to me but the rest was aight but things you should work on definitely is the structure that was jus crazy...

*Troop* a decent verse too punches were harder hittin and personals were good...i thought the MAB bit to begin wit was dope and the closer too was also effective flow and structure was perfect was real intact some wordplay and multies thrown in to so all round i think you got this...

V/*Troop*...RTF on my sig plz
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