Thread: Give me some feed back ya'll!!
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Old 12-17-04, 01:46 PM   #2
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From: The 8-0-8... HONOLULU BIATCH!
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this wasn't very good.

Your structure needs definate work... but you had okay vocab etc.

you will get better just keep on keepin' on nam'sayin'?

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