Voted For: L.I.

aiight ...

L.I:

your piece was very good... the wordplay was good, imagery was decent, definately could have been better... flow was on point, as was the vocabulary.. you used a different style with this topical , your vocabulary is extensive, before you used to throw in a couple good words now your whole verse is full of them... i think it could have been better but it was definately a good verse

overall : 8.5/10

i.mind:

you also had a good verse... you took this battle in the aspects of imagery and structure, your flow was less on point than L.I.'s was and your wordplay was definately good but it wasnt good enough in this situation... i like how you moved from one point to another.. from my paradise to ashed... i personally wouldnt do it but you worked with it pretty well... i think your verse could have been better also and you took a less approached method for this topic most people would talk about love like L.I. did but you were more original.

overall : 8/10

vote: L.I.

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