Voted For: ambient

CannaBarz:
ok you had a good emotion but some iight punches with a decent hit of wordplay in them and a few good metaphores in there but they werent to witty..
try working on your punches n shit...the vocabulary was pretty good and your stucture was good with a pretty decent flow to your verse...but just keep it up...you pretty good


Ambient:
nice stucture to your verse and had some pretty dope punchlinea and mixed with real nice witty metaphores in them...
pretty tight verse overal..i liked your verse the best just had a more of a funnier rb rv thing to it...lol

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