listenin, chorus is lackin mad emotion, lyrics are descent tho, flow doesnt stay consistant, tripple N you got a good voice but you need to keep it original, and rap about something better, its always the same, just my advice to switch up. once again chorus sucks balls. second part tha vocals are way higher, but man you've gotten better, you stay on beat better nowadayz, but you got a good vocal range you can hit alot of notes, i think this is tha best i've heard from you yet. good work. last dood, alot of static in the recording, and the lyrics are the best from this man, its funny to me. lyrics need to be turned down. i dunno, i think duece came pretty nyce on the mic. tripple N you put a frown on my face, you were elevating for a minute but now your skimpin on yer pimpin. slackin on yer mackin no what i mean?

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