hmmm, i've heard all y'alls shit before, and i must be the only one not feelin this joint, but i speak honestly so heres my feed.
i've downloaded this beat in hopes to use it awhile ago, then i figured that it was too fast tempo'd, maybe twista could rip it, thats all i can see tho. cuz the chorus was hard to make out, it sounded like you overlapped tha vocals like 3 times or more on tha hook, wasnt realy feelin it. oh yea, and on tha hook, you didnt put it in the right place, it realy fucked up diabolics part, cuz it got all dramatic in the middle where the hook is spose to be placed, the first guy came tha straightest when it comes to stayin on beat, but even he fell off near tha beginnin. and the flow was choppy. diabolic, you've gotten more emotion put in to this one. but like i said, its straight till the middle when the hook is "sposed" to kick in, but diabolic youre gettin mad good son, keep elevating. saraan, your flow is most choppy, it sounds sooo.... written? like it doesnt flow smoothly at all. i like most of your lyrics but theyre just choppy. this track seems like it was put together quick or something. im sorry i just wasnt feelin it cuz that beat just fucks it all up homeboyzzzzzzz. if you guys still got tha accapellas send em my way, ill mix this shit to a more fitting beat, but thats on y'all. get at me cuz it could be a sick track with a beat change.
