welll...
i like da concept of dis sig, and i think you had a good idea for it, but it didnt all turn out right...
first things first, the smoke looks like it has bevel on it, take dat off to give it a more realistic look...
fade it out a lil bit as well, that way you will be able to see your name behind da smoke and it will look better...
the subtext should maybe be a lil bit smaller, but i like how you tried to make it look like it was writing on the wall, that was a good idea...
your tag should be smaller though, most of us will know that you made your own sig especially...
but the thing that really hurt this is that it looks like your tryna pack too much into this sig...it looks really cluttered to me, so clear that up by makin some things smaller (such as subtext and tag...)
again you had a good idea for this sig, it jus didnt turn out so well...
in my book it would probably be somewhere around a 6/10 but if you can fix a few things then it would probably turn into a 7/10....maybe...

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