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chrorus, blah i don't know what to say, its a good idea...good lyrics...off beat...like wow..
limited.
..decent, you really need to work on your breath control, you could be pretty nice because you have an emotion that works, but your way too choppy right now...work on your lines, because sometimes you were a little bit too slow then you'd rush through a couple of lines...it was decent though, keep improving buddy
20 grand...
shit was really decent, you need a little bit more emotion, even with your typa flow, it was good though, but i notice in a couple of bars it seemed like you were just throwing in multies just so you had multies...but good looks
enygma...
wholy fuck this was nice, lyrics were dope as always, i could feel what you were saying emotion was dope as fuck, delivery was a lot better then you used to be, but the only thing was that even with the flow being good, you seemed like you were rushing to get everything out...
no doubt pretty good song guys...keep it coming
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