Voted For: ..Lyrical..

ok....i thought lyrical took this one pretty easily......
open was nice
2nd bar....lol...humor...and a hard punch
3rd bar...nice meta..punch
4th....decent
5th....nice...didnt get it till i read the explanation...then laughed....decent

jae.....
you should work on your structure a lot....it was hard to read....you had some decent lines..

1st bar...kinda self glorifying...no
2nd....another self glorifying bar...no
3rd....actually tried to throw a punch...better...but still wasnt feelin it
4th....no
5th...prolly best one cuz you attempted a personal...

i voted for lyrical because his whole verse was just on another level.....punches hit harder...structure was better...just a nicer verse....no hate to jae....good battle

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