Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

Personify:
first of all dont explain shit like that when you go so madly rank on it it makes your stucture look so fuckin messed...try and use a better style like godz angel did...but w/e still tho your punches were weak...i wasent feeling them one bit anyway...not to muhc of a use with the similies n metaphores...so theres nothing to great but a tiny bit of vocabulary...No Hate

Godz Angel:
i liked your stucture alot it was perfectly on straight liked that and then you flowed so damn good...with a perfect style of wordplay..for a 12 year old but anyway you still had good punches to win tho...but anyway good use of the metaphores and multis...good vocabulary...good work homie...No Hate to both

VOTE: Godz Angel

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