Voted For: ~philosopher~

one sided

punches- philo had harder hittin, and made more sense
personals- philo, much harder hittin, and more of em
metas- tie
multis- neither
word play- philo, wittier word play overall
humor- philo, i wuz laughin
flow- philo, overall it flowed easier
structure- parallel cuz it looked better

Philo good drop. nice personals and punches. word play wuz decent, work on structure. thats all i can say.

X/Para, work on punches, and better personals and wordplay. overall elevation is the key.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter.

v/ ~philosopher~

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