Voted For: ~philosopher~

my honest vote would have to go to philo...

PHILO...
Like 'virgin asians' in 'porn' flicks, this bitch is gonna get 'torn' (1)
Lmao at the quote, only time X seen pussy...
... Is when he was born! (2)

^^^ok. nothing spectacular...but you made your point.

Like 'gay men' addicted to 'druggs' this kid likes 'crack' (3)
And the "..." after your name leads to: "At being wack" (4)

^^^not really feeling it...sorry...

This kid threw a fit, cuz I got into classic and he wasn't let in the crew (5)
And it's sad, when to own X, posting his picture is all you have to do!

^^^okay, but i think you could have fine tuned the words a little better to make your initial concept hit harder, but im feelin' it.

Xclusive with girls reminds me of handicaps playing in the N.B.A., he can't 'score' (6)
Site is his life, cuz last time X was out with freinds...
... He was in a computer store!

^^^i see where you were going...but you fell off a little bit in your closer.

philo...you had a decent drop and show cool potential. honestly, i feel that you need to fine tune your punches and personals a little better. your structure was pretty bad overall, but it should be easy to work on. keep on doin' the damn thing.

PARA...
How can you get “respect” saying you’re the only philosopher…
Why you study males ejaculate, how did this “interference” occur…

^^^sorry...i didnt like this at all. it wasnt too funny in my opinion.

You run around say shit when your “minds” tingling in an ambition…
To bad your even worried of a intelligent smart “brained” musician…

^^^blah, blah, blah...
Word got up you fluked out getting into the “council” you dog fucker…
When you stepped to the “press box” you got the mad chills, burr…

^^^no, im sorry but that didnt hit the spot either.

para...you had nice structure and you tend to use decent vocab at times, but honestly i feel your verse fell flat. there was no heart here. you didnt seem like you were ever trying to win. work on your punches and personals a bit more. they might not have hit the spot as well as planned....but philosopher at least used a few in his verse. you have potential to do something...take advantage of that in the future. on a seperate note...i wish you the best with your new team and any upcoming battles. one.

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