seemed to have a lot of forced rhymes, but you seem to be elevating, it was an ok imagery.. the dennys pancakes line.. I didnt like at all, and the close liek father & son that was ight.. but that doesnt show love.. like a "family thing".. keep at it tho
Ill make sure to look for more.. good job all around tho
Please return the favor with no hate:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167103