good piece.. I liekd it alot, lot of imagery, and consent flow..
not much big vocab, but for a piece like this its not needed.
but the first 2 lines made me laugh.. LOL..
good piece, keep at it man.. you got something good going
keep elevating.
please return the favor:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167103
-remeber get 2 links (replys you did on others O.M), or mods will shut this piece, and dont let that happen.. its a coo piece.