Voted For: d.j em sce

d.j em sce took this one: more hardhitting punches and personals, structure was better. Liked vocab and wordplay in there, overall solid drop! xcell, improve your vocab to make it more complex and fix your structure cause it wasn't fun to read. Also put some more bold things in there to bring the other cat down...just read other battles and keep on doing ya thing...

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