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Old 12-20-04, 02:52 AM   #23
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Voted For: d.j em sce

d.j em sce

when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
^kinda self-glorification so wasn't really feeling ya opener

kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
^decent but nothing really bold

Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
^nice one!liked it

this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix
^okay closer but could've been better

Ruffridah187

Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
^didn't like your opener

Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
^okay...

This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
^you could've made that 2nd line way more hardhitting if you worded it different but it's aight

I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
^decent one

You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit
^not feeling your closer

My vote goes to d.j em sce because he had more originality, RuffRidah had potential in there but always managed to word the punch in a way he wasn't that effective anymore.Both vocab was nice,was feeling flow in both verses and structure was aight to. Was close battle for me to decide but i was just feeling d.j em sce's drop a lil more...
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