well.....you seriously need to elevate.....go to tutorials and see what multis, inners, metaphors, wordplay.....see what all that shit is.....
i honestly hated the concept of this.....how u love to kill? no...not feelin that.....and then you switched it to using drugs? just as bad....not feelin that either......
come up with something more original....just be you...rhyme about shit that matters....not killing...and popping pills...up your vocabulary a whole lot....read the dictionary or something.......and just learn words.....overall i give it a 1/10....sorry just the way i feel......just elevate....take the criticism and run with it....dont get mad...you will never get better that way.....

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