Voted For: intensify effect

Infector Mindz

Look At You! Spit A Verse Once..All You Rapping Is "Wackness"/
So Ima Leave ya 'Left-Eye-Missing' Like TLC The Day "The Accident-Happened!"/
^first line was weak, 2nd was okay

Oldschool? Your OldSchool ...Your A "Student-Of-Mine"/
Let's Role Play For A Bit .. "You Winning?" What Are U.."Losing Your Mind?"/
^didn't like the way you prepared in the first line, 2nd was good

Fucka Can't Even "Spit-Straight"..Give Em A "Quick-Eight"/
Becuz The Way This Looks..I Will Have To Hit um Till His Fucking "Wrist-Breaks"/
^uhm,decent but nothing bold

Yea Homey..You Nice? Your Like A "Near-Gay-Flanders"/
Plus You A Pussy! The Only People 'Waving-X' Is "Airplane Landers!"/Pussy=X..
^haha...liked this one...

This Pussy Scary Ass Fuck? You Flipping-No-Quotes!/
Thats Why The Only Time You Is 'Popping In The Hood' Is When An "Engine-Explodes!"/
^good...

And What? You Causing "Ruckus.".This Geek Goes "Unnoticed"/
Cause He Couldn't Get 'Shit Popping' Over Here..Filling Toilet Seats With "Explosives
^nice...

Had good wordplay in there but the punches could've lil more hardhitting but nothing too serious...Sometimes the first lines weren't that good, like the oldschool thing for instance but overall a solid drop...structure was kinda hard to follow at times because first line is o short n second long. Liked to see some more personals in there.

intensify effect

yo keep bitching bout how u itching to be the crew’s best addition
u'r the only member to get cut twice for being a cheer-leadder insted of in battle position...
^nice opener

WE SONNED AND WHORED R.I.P, but no dout give them there props
cause they showed N like the out-come, u also about to get DROPED....
^liked it...

u'r placed in this battle to lose, got ya head turn down like u was facing abuse
so quit rap N be a WRITTER,.... cuz thats the only way u'll be "MAKE'IN da NEWS"......
^okay...feeling it

u got a better chance eating me outta a alphabit ceral then u'll be clever-man
because like captin hook, u'r punches just "never-land".....
^haha, hot...

Man i seen your battles they a load of shit,you think you ego is that emense?
Replying to this post, is a good way to get reffered to in the pass-tense.......
^good...


plus You dont want ta fuck wit dis blood like i got HIV
cuz ill have u recorded as a loss.... like da last tyson fight on dvd....
^okay, wasnt really feeling ya first line though...


online ya names should be user disguised, the abuser of eyes cuz ya verse is misleading like seening the future throu the devils eyes......
^eyes 2x <--- didn't like that but overall decent closer

Nice verse...had some real bold punches n nice personals in there, good wordplay...Vocab n flow were aight. Definately very nice drop!

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