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Old 12-20-04, 04:52 PM   #9
Parallel
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well your verse wasnt to geat actually your wordplay and punches were off by lots...i wasent feelin your punches one bit...but your vocab was iight not the greatest but it worked...the stucture was off by quite a bit lol...flow well you flowed pretty good props to that...pz..no hate

Skiptz..
hmm pretty nice verse i liked the closer very well nice punches to top your whole verse off...i liked your stucture and it flowed pretty damn well...good verse tho...props to every thing..i also like your opener...it was pretty dope...but i just feel you took this easy...no hate pz

VOTE: skriptz
if you have time drop a vote on my battle verse epic there...in my sig theres a link
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