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Old 12-20-04, 05:51 PM   #8
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Voted For: ..Galieth..

good battle

punches- Gali, overall your punches hit harder, Dman, u actually said u were an underdog, so u complimented him.
personals- Gali, basically u had em and they hit a lot harder. Dman, u had a nameplay, but that wuz it.
metas- Gali, had em basically.
multis- Dman, overall u had more of em. Gali, only one set, though it did flow well.
word play- Gali, nice wordplay and decent vocab. Dman, not much wordplay, decent vocab.
structure- Gali, overall easier to read, except for the white colorin damn. Dman, work on your structure.
flow- Gali, never fell off heavily. Dman, hard to follow wit your breaks, fell of more than Gali's
humor- Even, i felt like ya both had nice humor.

Gali, nice drop overall. Good personals, and good punches. Overall keep it up.

Dman, decent drop, but i felt it wuz more like a song. try some personals next time, and better wordplay.

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v/..Galieth..

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