Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Chaos
Devistation
i wasent really feelin that shit good stucture n shit but you need work on yoru punchlines and wordplay if you had that you would be lethal you flowed very well but i just wasent feelin that to much use a lil more vocabulary to make people think if its actually i punch...sometimes it trickes them if they dont know what the words means into a punch...lol no hate..
Choas
pretty good verse overall...i like yours punchlines and wordplay mixed with some tight stucture and vocabulary on most lines anyway...but yea overall i feel you got this trigga...just a more of a vet style...also not to forget them witty metaphores..they were tight...no hate pz
VOTE...Choas
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