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Old 12-20-04, 06:00 PM   #15
Parallel
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Terror
well to start out with you had a weak punch and wordplay attemts...its liek you had nothing then you had some dumb rhymes ...and forced rhymes...work on metasphores vocabulary and rhyming on a more consistant bases...then you'll be something..no hate pz

Choas
not the best ive seen from you but i can tell how you didnt need to try on this...but anyways you came hard with the punches and wordplay also played a good witty metaphores in there to...very much dope lines from you i feel you took this easy...pz

VOTE...Coas
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