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Old 12-20-04, 06:05 PM   #15
Parallel
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Rising Sun..
meh not bad verse..i jsut feel you came weak...your vocabulary was good but you need work on your punches a lil more you have them but jsut not to great...try working on them...and then you'll be dope....metaphores were pretty dope n shit...pz

Choas
pretty good the worst ive seen from you but it was good nice wordplay and punchlines overal you had some nice lines and shit...also soem pretty dope witty metaphores in there...keep workin tho...cuz its liek whoa..but you got this simply...no hate to both iight...pz

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