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Ex
Good Structure Nice Going, The Flow Was Tight, Still No Rhyme Scheme But You'll Get It Sooner Or Later... Add More Punches And Personals, Multis And Metas...Good Verse Dopeness......8/10
Areal
First Off Your Structure Was Fuck It Was Chatoic I Couldnt See Where Your Bars End, Those Dotted Line Wasn't Working. Add More Punches Personals Came Weeker You Can Do Better, Mutis Was Needed Here Too..................................
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