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Old 12-21-04, 12:01 AM   #12
Wickedclown
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Voted For: ..Galieth..

aight good battle here...... imma break it down for u 2...here we go:

Galieth: for starters fuckin lose the white font, goddamn that hurts my eyes tryin to read that sorta shit.... any way, the structure was aight except the font color was ass but that dont matter... flow was good and was consistant throughout the verse which is good, punches and personals suprisingly were good, ive never read ya shit so i thought it wouldnt be good in the punches and personals department but it was pretty good..... vocab was good, u used a couple of complex things which will always help a verse out a bit.... shit was creative to a point so all in all this was a pretty tight verse, not the best ive seen but it was good.....overall i give this verse a 6.5/10

Dopeman: aight you also had a pretty good verse.... your structure on the other hand actualy hurt you in this one... the structure was kinda ass... flow was pretty good but would have been better with a better structure... so work on that shit dawg (no hate).... punches and personals were pretty good, some had me laughin like ya opener was good... your vocab was pretty good throughout the verse which is always a good thing and can only help a verse out... your shit was creative man, i liked it all except the strucuture.... all in all a good verse... 6/10

aight this was a close battle.... both of yall did very well here and much respect to the both of you... you both came and did ya thing and ya gotta respect that... but galieth is gonna take this one and i hate to say it but this one came all the way down to strucuture.... Dope man no hate homie, just work on the strucuture and u got it dawg.... good battle from both of you......................

VOTE- Galieth