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Old 12-21-04, 03:15 AM   #11
Ike
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Voted For: ..Exponent..

exponent........
Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard..
He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job..
lol....shit actually made me laugh a lil bit....7/10

No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader..
He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper..
hmm....didnt like it too much....didnt hit too hard 3/10

Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b...
Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c..
Decent....work on wordplay some......5/10

Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb..
Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen)
ok personal.....2nd line wasnt too great.....5/10

Aeral.......
Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky...
..& he's an exponent??
...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI
hmm ok opener....ok meta.....6/10 (could have been worded better)

You'll go broke but this is not the great depression...
could cut off ya left hand...
............& still couldn't leave the right impression
didnt like the first line....2nd line was ok...5/10

Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick...
...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist
not feeling this at all....didnt rhyme well.....2/10

Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove
I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love
sex jokes are played........3/10


exponent.....20/40.....decent...could have came harder but i guess you didnt have to....i felt like his punches hit harder...his structure was better.....overall it was just a better verse...

Aeral......16/20......couple of bars were played....couple of lines were ok....practice being more consistent.....
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