Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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Voted For: GangsStarShit
open:GSS: "Whoever said you were dope...musta been kiddin,
Coz u only cause drafts from exhailin when spittin," -Good opener, hard punch, good use of metas. I think em sce was trying too hard to get good complicated vocab in there he forgot about making it actually good!
close:GSS: "You take stuff too serious like it's a god damn mission,
And i'm afraid i can't help ya coz ya lost ya ambition," -Pure genius!! Personal, hard-hitting punch line, metaphor.
-em sce's close was ok but im afraid doesnt even compare.
GangsStarShit's best line:
"Face it ya overrated and people jus dickride the shit you do,
Ya spits are lame shit i seen bacon spit better than you," -i dont think ive seen many verses as good as this in a battle and this line just topped it off I think.
Em sce's Best line:
"ur not even fully developed so how u gonna get da bigga picture
dis aint a kodak moment its ur death in sum lyrical scriptures" -This was quite good. But to be honest i dont think even this line came close to GSS's worst in this verse.
Overall: GSS wiped the floor with DJ em sce. Anyone who thinks otherwise is a liar!!!! This isnt opionion it is fact. GSS's use of metaphors, personals, punchlines and overall entertainment of the verse was far superior to most battle verses i have seen on this whole site.
-Keep it up.
DJ em sce: you are obviously good. Your vocab was good, you did have a good use of metas but mainly your pnches were weaker. Dont take this as hate, i am just saying wat i think
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