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Old 12-21-04, 01:14 PM   #15
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Voted For: Melancholy

hmm, this is a good battle, basiclly, Melancholy won this one..

Melancholy: Nyce multi's, very good punchlines, and okay vocab... Your structure was okay but that doesn't really matter, and ur flow was nyce...
7/10

Yupi!:
your line's wern't even dat good man, you seriously gotta come up with better punchlines, put more thought into it, your structure was good, but flow kinda off at the end, your vocab was to elementary, and just elevate on all of that..
5/10

vote:Melancholy

by the way, Melancholy, im battlin you so umm, pm me when you read this vote so we can think of a topic
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