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Old 12-21-04, 03:28 PM   #2
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this was aiight kinda basic.....you had a lot of mutlis but your flow fell off some..........work on vocab and metas.........also fix up ya structure and get rid of the / after the lines its herbish and noone likes it.......jus keep doing ya thing man.....
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