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Old 12-21-04, 05:24 PM   #21
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Voted For: Terror2005

If you wanna see some terror, take a quick peep at his verse
Cuz i back up my beef like a meat truck stuck in reverse
^^^special, dope wordplay but not a punch.

terror, real basic stuff but more actual punches not as many self gloryfing lines like sayin what you can do or like "im layin you out"

Yo son im tellin da truth in dis battle your dealin wit a "deadly target"//
U wouldnt be on fire even if u was covered wit gas had a match and sparked it//

I really dont think ur goin to win dis one cuz winnin is my instinct//
ur style is bout as fake as the "backstreet boys" and "N'Sync"//
^^^more of the right idea, think of sumin to call him or sumin he's lackin, and put it into wordplay form. not bad.
vote-this cat for doin more of what your sopposed to in battles
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