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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
this was ah'ight...a little too simplistic in my opnion...get more metaphorically wit ya poetry...if you had made ya lines more complex...u woulda had a stronger piece but as is...its a solid....7/10...stay up...good job
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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