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Voted For: Ike
Ike:
You Had A Decent Flow, The Stretched Lines In Your Verse Didn't Help Out, But Your WordPlay Was Sick Good Opener, Punches Should Of Came A Little Harder But It Was There, Personals Wasn't Really Working On This Category, Your Vocabulary Was Kinf Of Basic To But Punches And WordPlay Made Up For That, That's Basically What Got You THe Upper Hand On This Battle, Multi's Need More Of That...I've Seen Better From You, Meta's Was Alright Nothing Special
Spek:
What Happen In This Verse Was Your Vocabulary And Punches Was Better Then Any THing Else, Punches Wasn't That Great Though, Your Words Was Looking FOrced Here, And Personals Never Added Up The Dike Line Is So Played, Terrible Closer, Structure Was Just As Bas As Ike's..And You Need To Explain Some Of Ya Lines, Your Best Line Struck As The Dr. Seuss Line, Meta's Was Good In This Verse It Helped A Little...Multi's Need To Be Added In Here, WordPlay Wasn't There, Look Like You Tryed To Attempt It But It Never Came Out Good, Basically Your Lines Was Stretched And Forced Words Loss This Battle For You... Some THing You Need To Woork On There
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