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Old 12-22-04, 02:46 AM   #25
Spektikul
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Voted For: Viscosity

lol @ how this is a one-sided battle...

Opener - Viscosity, Dats wasnt a punch
Closer - Viscosity, Dats hurt himself more
Punches - Viscosity, Dat you needa elevate here
Personals - Viscosity, Dat you had none
Metas - Tie, both used'em, some better than others...
Multies - Viscosity, Dats attemps were weak
Vocab - Viscosity, Dat didnt have an vocab
Flow - Neither, both had no flow
Creativity - Viscosity for the "On Stage Battle" theme

Overall I didnt wanna seem like a total jackass asking DatBoiRob why he battled a much more experienced rook, but I envy him for the effort. Nice try dawg, but I think you need to really elevate some of your skills. First off, try keeping all of your lines close to the same lenght to ensure that the overall flow of your verse isnt thrown off. Next, try thinking of some personals that you can use on your opponent, even before that battle has began. Punches are also key, you didnt really have much in here but when you do elevate, you must think of some material that will make the votes laugh. Try making your opponent look stupid by throwing more than they can handle at them. Finally once youve mastered those...try throwing in some extra spice by using metas and multies. Play with it, and keep elevating...battling kats that are better than you will allow you to learn from your mistakes.

Easy win for Viscosity, maybe next time pick on someone your own skill level, lol...I mean, you didnt even try and still won. Come on dawg, hahaha. Good shit tho, nevertheless, you have earned my vote.

Props to both, Payce.