Voted For: Verbal Abuse
wow. this was a great battle all together.. by both
wooah.. the structure by both was near perfect.
the flow by both was constent the whole time.
the creativity/imagery was great
Its strange how I can't scream, cause my mouth has been sewn shut
The rest of my body remains broken, burnt and badly cut
But then something happened, that was worse than all the rest
My ribs started breaking, and then open went my chest
that right there had mad imagery.
your lives are lived a martyr. these days, ppl pop pills like suicide is health.
if it was that popular back then, jesus would have crucified himself.
that right there was tight to me..
To me V.A took this by a hair.
this was a great battle.
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