Voted For: final

Close battle... I didn't really like the topic, but O well... Final...
Your shit started off really hot... Good emotion and word choice... I saw more potential for this verse if it could have been longer... I didn't really like how you ended it, with her poppin you wit a gun or whatever... But the beggining was real hot...

7/10-9/10 if you fixed the ending though...

Conclusion... I read the first line and thought you were going to come whack as fuck... I mean...

Inserted The Newly Cut Key's For My New Crib Into The Keyhole.

Not really topical style... After that first line you picked up though...

A Emotional Scar Imbedded My Memory & Stained My Girl's Trust.
All My Feeling's For Her Were Banished,Love, Passion, & Lust.

I felt that that was your best bar... I don't like how you ended it either... Both of you need to work on your endings for sure...

v/final...