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Old 12-22-04, 03:23 PM   #11
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Voted For: anxiety

good shit to both but im gonna have to go with anxiety...

1.parallel your verse had a good flow but it wasnt really drawing me in...it got boring and there was a lack of vocabulary that could of been placed to make the lines sound better...

2.anx your verse had good flow and vocab...the words kept me in and made me stay more focused and i thought the flow was better

good verses to both overall but i go with anx for more vocab and better flow both imagery was equal i didnt notice imagery like that since the topic didnt really involve it...

good luck to both
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