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Old 12-22-04, 04:43 PM   #9
Parallel
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Voted For: girlmerkinu

kkkhater:
ok first of all....you need work on stucture n vocabulary and you need help with a more consistant flow...your wordplay, well you didnt have any kool words played in there....try working on wordplay or something...might give you a better grip on the topical...no hate

Girlmerkinu
not bad...first topical ive seen from you to be honest..besides your audios..lol...nice vocab in the ender....nice wordplay...very well done stucture and a decent flow to your verse, there isnt to much to say that was crap cuz shit girls merkin catsno hate pz

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