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structure par by far both had pretty stretched lines but ur lines were more even
vocab parralel no doubt phil came basic
flow both were pretty good but phil was better due to his basicness but unfortunately text flow doesnt really matter
creativensee all of phils punches were played parralel was all original for the most part
phil wor on ur vocab structure find some better personals and work on creativeness
par work on personals and wordplay
good battle to both but par got this with better structure vocab and creativeness

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