Voted For: anxiety

Emotion: Okay i thought that both pieces had good emotion but i felt that anxietys was a little bit stronger then yours parallel...

Imagery: Anxiety took this one aswell... His imagery was really great... Nice vivid imagery in this piece it really portrayed a picture in my mind as the story wen along... Could this be piece be based on your life?... Parallel your imagery was good aswell i just wasnt feeling it near as much as i was his... prolly cause i could relate to that when i was his age

Creativity: This is pretty much a tie beucaes i felt that both was about real life events and shit but once again ima have to go with anxiety beucaes i relate more to his

Vocabulary: Again anxiety took this aswell... His vocabulary was just more complex throught the verse...

Vote: Anxiety for taking all the catagorys and obviously having the better piece...