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Old 12-22-04, 05:12 PM   #15
Ancel
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Voted For: Black Thief

-Black Thief-
Your verse was good...
your sctures wasnt the best at all you had one really stretched line...
your verse wasnt anywhere near evened out....
your flow was good although the lines being stretched kinda wears the flow out....
the pucnhes was good though some hit harder then other but i wouls say it was pretty much even with you consistancy with the punches...

-Boston-
Your struture wasnt good either but it was more evened out and had kinda a patteren to it but yeah it was better then his so thats all that matters...
your flow was okay aswell but with the lines being long then short like that throws off the flow....
punches was good but you just wasnt as consistant as Black was