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IP:
Voted For: Terse
This Kid Took It Easily...
Elusiv Lacks The Hard Hitting Punches...
In All The Battles I've Seen She Hasnt Really Possesed Them...
Aiight Here's The Beak Down...
Quote:
Wordplay: Terse
Punches: Terse
Flow: Terse
Structure: Terse
Opener: Terse
Closer: G (Actually Like The Last Line)
Overall Enjoyment: Terse
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Here's Is The Verse Break Down For Terse Since He Won...
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I laugh at u son, cuz u think u prepared ta' spit
but u wouldnt spit raw if u ate sushi widda hair in it
Kinda Basic But You Did Have Some Decent Wordplay In It... 7.3
in terms of talent, we can never be called equal
Elusiv's nice...but only cuz money's the root of all evil
Ya, Calling Her Poor And Whatever It Was Alittle Above Rv Though... 8.6
dont lie to yourself, u aint a real G that came ta' merk
shit, if u quit playin mind games, then maybe ya brain'll work
Calling Her A Retard, I See. Again Most Of Rv Wont Want To Think This Much About Wordplay... 6.5
ya rhymes is ass...lemme show u how you're surpassed jack
puttin ya verse in uppercase, will only leave ya ASS CAPPED
Was A Decent Punch, Kinda Liked It. But You Directly Said Ass In The First Line And Then It Repeated. Thats A No-No... 8.0
this battle's no where near close, EG's been ravaged to strips
even if this was down to the wire, this clumsy faggot would trip
Thats Pretty Weak. Who Says The Wire Is Low? That Not Really An Acuarate Punch... 3.2
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Aiight And Thats Whats Up...
Not Really All That Great Of A Battle But It Was Aiight...
Some Decent Punches Thrown...
But Overall You Both Need Some Elevation...
And Terse You Need To Work On Verse Consistancy...
G, Work On Strengthening Your Punches And Getting More Original/Creative Wordplay...
Maybe Try Shortening Up Your Bars A Bit Too...
Your Structure Was Alittle Strechted...
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