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Originally Posted by Triple_N
Word...ya friend is talented man.....her imagery was nice....I like how she thoroughly described her thoughts in this piece...it was very enjoyable.....an complex but understandable...thats real peotry...good job ma'
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yo triple shes a gurl...lmao...
but anyway ya your freind is talented...got some skill...i would say that the stucture needs work...the vocabulary was pretty good...and the flow was done nicely...could use more wordplay but i seen some trippy stuff...and very tight metaphores used in here...good luck...drop feed on my alaises open mics...IMIND knows who i am
*edited*...sry about the swears knowing that yall are religous n stuff
i am too
...but i jsut dont do the stuff you gurls/guys do..