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Old 12-22-04, 09:12 PM   #14
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Voted For: hang-man


LOOK chump...cuz everybody’s already seen ur lame shit
so da only way u'll win is with all da dick ryder approval from ya AIM list * dick ryders*
^^^good punch
this shot at a win is aim-less, but i make sure this BODY-COUNTS
N it aint a case of ruff-sex, u just get HEAD from u'r BARBIE-MOUTH *that why ya shit hurts ha*
^^humerous and creative punch
my flow is mouth-filling, N u'r drowning with out a sip-yet
N i killa-cam-flow, so u must be one of hes buddys whos known to DIP-SET
^^kinda weak but ok personal atempt
Hope you wasn't expecting a win, dumb fuck, your far below
I read your verse with a glove on, N still couldn't catch your flow
^^lol decent kinda played
im simple amazing everyone knows here im a savage
N if u moved above me is the only time i'll actully be BE-LOW-AVERAGE
^^fisrt line was self gorified but cleaned it up with the 2nd line which was a good punch
N when someone mention the MERKAGE i did to u
all imma say is,
of course im going HARD on a BITCH I' done slip the finger too.. *get it*
^^lol good humorous punch

you had good humerous punches ok structure....good personal attempt....better vocab........okay multi's....good flow.....


Ya Name sounds Prosperous But you Still Have no Wins
You Talk Shit but ya record Sets Ya respect bac to ""3-10"
^^decent personal
You know that Im Miraculas, Packin Dis Thats Jus da half of it
go ahead n Post ya verse so i can Laught at It
^^self glorification weak punch
Mayne wit dat record of 3-10 we can see U at some hard luck
You Taken Brid baths bcuz we can All see you washed up
^^good personal, better then opener
U like Godz Angels & untraceable U gotta Learn The Hard way
Youll get popped n Trigga Shocked by my Gat N Brod day
^^ok punch but i beat you in our battle so yeh....weakens it
This Is Jus A Test That You Aint passin Bitch
Stop My Verse now So I can Show you how a savage get
^^weird how u both used savage..lol....decent punch

weak punches......ok personals..........structure was bad.......up your vocab......flow was good.....you came harder in our battle i thought......and jus cuz you voted for me aint mean ima vote for you.....

v/hang-man

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